Senin, 01 Juli 2019

'The internet provides many conveniences for modern life but these are outweighed by the dangers it presents

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Information in Include
1
Introduction and Thesis Statement
Internet is very important in this era, but we have to see the consequence of using it. because of that we have to see the benefit and unbenefit of the internet.
2
Argument for
1.     The internet give us convenience on education; distance learning, e-book and etc.
2.      The internet forming job vacancies such as You Tube
3.     Give us the easy access; online shopping, ojek online etc.
3
Arguments against
1.     News can’t be trusted (hoaxes)
2.     Increasing crime and unsecure
3.     Addicted to the internet, cause diseases
4
Conclusion
In my opinion the internet could be good and  sometimes could be bad. We can’t blame the internet but we have to improve our guard and our consciousness on using the internet.

























      Internet is a media that could connected the global network system with a certain methods. Which means, it links people all around the world with their own interests. This media give many convenience such as education, politic, online shopping and etc. Beside that it gives bad impact to the people. Because of that issue this essay will explore the good impact and bad impact of the internet.

     Nowadays we could not detached from the internet, it provides many informations and conveniences. With the internet we could easily accessing the information that we need. Instance we have a problem with our math, we could search it on the internet which provides distance learning. Beside that we could find a rare book which is almost impossible to find it. The internet also gives us job opportunities such us you tube, in fact many people are changed their profession to be youtuber. Other than that internet gives convenience on shopping and ordering taxi. Many people use this media to buy and sell their product.

     Although the internet gives us ample conveniences, it also gives us disadvantages. One of them is increasing hoaxes, recently the government warn us about hoaxes which causing demonstration. Beside that the internet is the place where the terrorist is communicate, which mean it gives convenience on crime. The internet changes our habit. Because of the internet gives us ample conveniences, it makes us addicted to it which causing stay up late, redundanting time on internet and etc.

     In conclusion, as we can see that the internet is very useful in this era, it gives us many conveniences. Because of its conveniences we could not detached from the internet. However the internet is not only good things, it is also can be bad things, such us crime, hoaxes and addiction. In my opinion the internet could be good and sometimes could be bad. We can’t blame the internet but we have to improve our guard and our consciousness on using the internet.

6 komentar:

  1. Your first sentence in your third paragraph should be 'example'.

    BalasHapus
  2. you tube or youtube?
    not bad at all..

    BalasHapus
  3. Good essay but better you give one picture in before first paragraph it make your reader more interested to read your essay

    BalasHapus
  4. good essay , good conclusion such an inspiration

    BalasHapus